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Culture: IELTS Writing Task 2 question

Some people say that traditional festivals have lost their true meaning because they have become too focused on shopping and spending money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Question type: Opinion (agree or disagree) · Write at least 250 words · About 40 minutes

How to approach it

This statement contains a claim and a reason: festivals have lost their meaning, and commercialisation is the cause. You can agree with both, disagree with both, or accept that festivals are more commercial while arguing that their meaning survives. Use general examples of festivals rather than long descriptions of one celebration.

Suggested outline

  1. Intro: paraphrase the statement and give a partly-agree position: festivals are more commercial than before, but their core meaning has not disappeared.
  2. Body 1: evidence of commercialisation - advertising starts weeks early, there is pressure to buy expensive gifts, and sales events dominate the media.
  3. Body 2: why the meaning survives - families still gather, religious and cultural rituals continue, and giving gifts can itself be a way of showing care.
  4. Conclusion: restate the partial agreement and suggest that people, not businesses, decide what a festival means to them.

Arguments for

  • Shops advertise festival products weeks or months in advance
  • Gift-giving has become a source of financial pressure and debt
  • Some young people know the shopping customs better than the history

Arguments against

  • Families still use festivals to meet and share meals
  • Traditional rituals and ceremonies continue alongside shopping
  • Festival spending supports local businesses and jobs

Band 7+ vocabulary

  • commercialisation – the process of turning something into a way to make money
  • consumer culture – a way of life focused on buying things
  • cultural heritage – traditions and customs passed down from the past
  • lose its significance – become less important or meaningful
  • family gatherings – occasions when relatives meet together
  • the festive season – the period around a major holiday

Common mistakes on this question

  • Describing one festival in great detail, which uses words but does not build an argument.
  • Ignoring the reason given in the statement, which is commercialisation.
  • Using 'festival' and 'holiday' as if they always mean the same thing.

Band 8 model answer

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It is often claimed that traditional festivals no longer mean what they once did because they have become occasions for shopping and spending. I partly agree: these celebrations are certainly more commercial than in the past, but I do not believe their deeper meaning has been lost.

The commercialisation of festivals is hard to ignore. In many countries, advertisements for a major holiday appear weeks or even months before the day itself, and shops fill their windows with decorations long before families have begun to think about the celebration. Television and social media are full of special sales, and people can feel pressure to buy expensive gifts in order to show their affection or avoid looking mean. For some families, the festive season brings more anxiety about money than joy, and it is understandable that critics see the occasion as having been taken over by consumer culture.

However, behind the advertising, much of the original purpose survives. Festivals remain one of the few times of year when relatives travel long distances to be together, and these family gatherings are often the moments that people remember most clearly. Religious services, traditional meals and local customs continue to be practised, and children still learn them from their parents and grandparents. Even the exchange of gifts, which is often criticised, can express real care when it is done thoughtfully; a simple present chosen with a particular person in mind carries meaning that has nothing to do with its price.

In conclusion, although businesses have turned many festivals into opportunities for profit, I do not think these celebrations have lost their significance. Ultimately, it is people rather than companies who decide what a festival means, and many families continue to treat these occasions as a time for connection rather than consumption.

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