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Cities: IELTS Writing Task 2 question
In many cities, older buildings are being knocked down and replaced with modern high-rise towers. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Question type: Advantages and disadvantages · Write at least 250 words · About 40 minutes
How to approach it
Discuss the benefits and drawbacks of replacing old buildings with tall modern ones, then decide which side is stronger. Your judgement can depend on the type of old building, but it must be clear. Keep the focus on cities and the people who live in them.
Suggested outline
- Intro: paraphrase the statement and state that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages when buildings of historic value are lost.
- Body 1: the advantages - more homes and offices on limited land, modern safety and energy standards, and new business investment.
- Body 2: the disadvantages - loss of history and local character, long-term residents and small shops forced out, and cities that start to look the same; e.g. an old market district replaced by identical glass towers.
- Conclusion: restate your judgement and suggest building towers on empty or industrial land while protecting heritage areas.
Advantages
- Tall buildings provide more housing on limited land
- New buildings can be safer and more energy-efficient
- Modern offices can attract businesses and jobs
Disadvantages
- Cities lose their history and unique character
- Long-term residents and small shops may be forced out
- Many cities start to look the same
Band 7+ vocabulary
- urban redevelopment – rebuilding parts of a city
- historic buildings – old buildings that are important in history
- architectural heritage – valuable old buildings that a society wants to keep
- population density – the number of people living in an area
- energy-efficient – using less energy to work well
- the city skyline – the outline of a city's buildings against the sky
- be demolished – be knocked down
Common mistakes on this question
- Writing only about architectural style without explaining the effects on residents.
- Forgetting to say clearly whether the advantages or the disadvantages are greater.
- Confusing 'historic' (important in history) with 'historical' (relating to history).
Band 8 model answer
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In many cities, older buildings are being demolished to make way for modern tower blocks. While this kind of redevelopment brings some benefits, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh them when buildings of historical value are lost.
There are understandable reasons for replacing old buildings with high-rise towers. Cities with a growing population and little available land need more homes and offices, and building upwards allows a much higher population density on the same plot. Modern towers can also be built to current safety standards and made far more energy-efficient than older structures, which are often poorly insulated and expensive to heat. In addition, an impressive new development can attract investment, bringing new businesses and jobs to an area that may have been in decline.
However, the costs of this trend are often greater. When historic buildings are destroyed, a city loses part of its memory and its architectural heritage, which cannot be recreated once it is gone. The process also tends to push out the people who gave the area its character: long-term residents and small family shops are frequently unable to afford the higher rents in the new towers. Consider an old market district with narrow streets, traditional workshops and cafes that have served the same families for generations; if it is replaced by identical glass blocks, the city gains floor space but loses a unique place. As this happens in city after city, urban centres everywhere begin to look the same, which makes city life duller for residents and less attractive to visitors.
In conclusion, although high-rise development is sometimes necessary, I believe its drawbacks are greater when it destroys historic areas. Planners should build towers on empty or former industrial land while protecting neighbourhoods of historical importance.
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